Wake Up and Face the Nightmare - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BonkersLeighRose, Mar 10, 2012.

  1. I would love some feedback for my story and don't worry about being harsh but please say why you think what you think. Also don't expect much from me this week because I've got loads of test and things.
     
    #1 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 10, 2012
  2. I really like it! I hope u continue!
     
    #2 hellomelinck4321, Mar 10, 2012
  3. Thank you
     
    #3 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 10, 2012
  4. OMG :0 HURRY!!! WRITE MORE :0 I LOVE IT!
     
    #4 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 11, 2012
  5. Sorry but you won't get more for a because I've got a busy week. I'll post more next week.
     
    #5 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 11, 2012
  6. *for a while
     
    #6 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 11, 2012
  7. -passes out- NOOOOO Dx it's soooo good
     
    #7 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  8. I have just posted the new chapter. I know I said at the weekend but I am really enjoying this and I really hope I wont fail my exams tomorrow :shock: Hope you enjoy and I would love any feedback particually on what you think about Natasha.
     
    #8 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 15, 2012
  9. Hmmm.... No offense, but I can't remember why I wanted another chapter so much, I don't even remember reading the first part....
     
    #9 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 15, 2012
  10. Lol probably cos I posted the first one a while ago.
     
    #10 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 15, 2012
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    #11 *THP_I_I__Lerjjx__I_I_THP (01), Mar 16, 2012
  12. I want feedback on what you think about Natasha, Alicia and Toni. Also Chapter 3 needs a title so if you have any ideas then please post them :)
     
    #12 BonkersLeighRose, Mar 18, 2012
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