Verday's Twilight- By SStG

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Renatum, Dec 26, 2011.

  1. Please don't post here, I made a feedback thread.

    Yo! Yeah you! Reader! Hi, this is SStG. I've decided to do what all the cool kids are doing these days (darn whippersnappers), make a story! This is Verday's Twilight a Sci-Fi/Fantasy story about Verday, a land besieged be a threat from another star. Without further ado, I present to you, Verday's Twilight...

    Verday's Twilight


    (Levels are displayed to show comparative strength and experience)


    Player1- Gora'n
    Level 1 Knight

    Player2- S'hik
    Level 1Rogue

    Player3- Merzal
    Level 1 Healer/ mage


    Chapter 1: Ridiculous Suspenseful Preamble

    Long ago in the land of Verday, a great threat besieged the land. The Ner'vak'ti, aliens from a nearby star, have invaded. The regular forces of Verday are no match. Three weak people have been given a great task, little training, and fewer supplies.
    The are Gora'n the knight, S'hik the rouge, and Merzal the healer. Along the way they encountered many difficulties, but the persevered. Here is an account told by Gora'n
     
  2. Chapter 2: The Journey Begins
    I am woken up by my little sister's shaking, "WAKE UP!!! TIME TO SAVE THE WORLD!!"
    "I know! I know.", I reply sleepily. I get up and have a breakfast. The sun has yet to rise. "Nice and cool, perfect for a journey." I think to myself. I bid my parents farewell, collect and don my armor, and head to the stables.
    "Well rested, Zark? I hope so, we have a long day ahead." I tell my horse. We ride swiftly to the capital's castle, one of the last remaining bastions of Verdayian resistance.
    We make it to the gates, and are stopped by guards, "Identify yourself!" they command. "Gora'n, here to see the king."
    "The other two have already arrived." I give my horse to the stablemaster and proceed into the waiting room.
    After a short wait, a tall man who has an aura of power, not at all diminished by the golden royal armor and hard-won facial scars, walks in. "Gora'n, S'hik, Merzal, do you all know why you are here?"
    "You have a mission for us, your majesty." we say in almost unison. "Yes, one of great importance. Our enemy cannot be stopped by a straight slugging match. More... precise and unseen methods are required. I require you to infiltrate the most heavily guarded enemy stronghold, assassinate their leader, and destroy their power source. All with minimal resources and a tight deadline. Our forces can survive two months, no more."
     
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    I posted here
     
  4. don't forget to include a chapter about the emo's who thought they were writers.
     
  5. bump for feedback.

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