Killing is my thing. Blood and satisfaction to hear the cry of the enemy, When you sink the blade in their throat and they fall doubting all the torment they gave me, begging for forgiveness. I give no mercy for my victims no happy endings if you piss me off and don't say sorry...your dead. I walk down the corridor of Elaxador High school, the bottom of my black leather coat brushing the top of my knee high trainers. There he was my first victim all time cool boy, smart, annoying and he hates me. His name is Jefferey Thomas
Stop copying lil_tiger. Also, if your gonna start a story, post more. Don't just make random threads lying around
This is a lot better than last time, but there are still a lot of errors. When ever there is a pause in a sentence, add a comma. Also, when you listed the facts about Jeffrey Thomas you should have put a comma after the and. Finally, this is just a friendly reminder to everyone that your= you own it and you're= you are. This a lot better but you still have room to improve
Hello my name is Jerry Jackson I have two friends their names are tobi and mikaeal I have a horse its name is batman Sorry. Just felt like I should contribute a crappy post to a crappy thread.