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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Xx-FrostyTheSatanist-xX, Mar 19, 2012.

  1. This is a first person semi-horror story, if you can't handle violence or anything of that nature... Well that sucks for you.

    I jumped out of bed as a loud scream happened. "Jamie?" I asked as I looked out of my room. The scream happened again. "Jamie??" I yelled and went slowly towards her room. I saw a small trickle of blood come out from under the door. "J-Jamie?" I gulped and opened the door. Over her body there was a creature eating her organ. I fled in terror as the still-warm blood hit my toes.
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    "Explain what you saw again, Ma'am" said the woman. "There was my sister, dead, with a thing over her body. He had her liver in his left hand and her small intestine in his right. It looked like he was putting it in some kind of sack. I ran away before I saw anything else" I slowly explained. "None of this happened Ms." said the woman. "Yes it did!!!" I said standing up from the leather chair. "Calm down Ms. Monroe." she said. She's a therapist, Dr. Vinn I think. "She's dead! I saw her! She was born April 26th, 1994. She had black hair and green eyes. She was my little sister!" I cried. "There is no records of her, there was no blood in the room you said it happened, there was nothing there." Dr. Vinn explained slowly thinking if she said it like that I could process it. "She. Was. ALIVE!" I screeched and stormed out of the therapy room into the lobby crying. Everyone stared at me weird. "Problem?" I asked and walked out of the building into my car.

    "She was alive. She did exist. And I'm NOT crazy." I muttered to myself pulling away in my blue 2009 Legend.
     
  2. What if everyone else was insane and the main character was perfectly normal 0.0
     
  3. When I pulled into the driveway of my blue house, where Jamie died. I hesitated to walk inside but I did. My parents died when I was younger leaving only Jamie left. I went to the fridge and opened a coke. I looked up at the ceiling. "Right above me, is the room where she died..." I sighed. The door bell rang and there were two big men in white standing there waiting.

    "Ms. Monroe? Please come with us..." One said. He was so hairy he looked like a werewolf, I'm going to call him Wolfy. I read their uniforms. 'Scottsdale Arizona Insane Asylum'. "I am not insane! I will show you the blood stains!!" I said and they stepped towards me. I ran down the hallway to the back door and jumped out and ran outside. They were quickly following me. I hopped the gate and hid in some bushes. "Where did she go?" Wolfy asked walking around.

    "She'll show up eventually. We'll tell the boss she wasn't home." the other said. "Good idea." Wolfy said and they drove away. I slowly got up and waited until they were out of sight before I made any Major movements. "I'm not insane!" I screamed after their truck. Brushing off my ripped jeans, I got up and fixed my red shirt. "They are trying to put me in an asylum! What's next?" I muttered, then a cop car drove and stopped by my house. "Why are they here!" and with that a stormed over to them.

    "Ms. Monroe, your coming with us on the fact you robbed the convenience store last night." The cop said. "What!" I screamed and they cuffed me putting me in the car.
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  4. What happened to the coke? O_O
    Did she drop it? ......Awww poor coke ...yummy coke...I want a coke now
     
  5. The coke is still on her table...
     
  6. Awesome start to a novel
     
  7. I mumbled until we reached the station, I've been through this to many times before. They got my record and set a thick file down. "Is this you robbing this store?" a cop said. Wolfy and his friend were standing by me. I stared at the girl's face in the picture. "That's not me" i said looking at him. "Look at her, she looks like you and you have such a thick criminal record-" he started to say but I interrupted, "it's not me." I stared into his eyes. "Look at that girl, then back at me. Her cheek bones are different and hair length." I told him. "Also, I would never dress like that" he just stared at me and then held the picture by me. "She's right, different cheek bones, hair length, even eye color and nose. I'm sorry for in inconvenience" he said and motioned Wolfy to take the cuffs off me. I winked and stated "If you need help call me" then walked out.

    I ran home and listened carefully around my house to make sure no one or thing was there, my house was empty. I sat down at the table. "What to do... What to do..." I asked myself. "You could talk to me!" a voice said. I jumped up and backed against a wall. "Who's there?" I asked slowly. "God you can't remember your best fried?!" the voice said again and Ana walked in the room. I hit her stomach lightly. "Why were you in my house?" I asked. "Got bored. Make some popcorn let's watch a movie" Ana commanded and I didn't object. After the popcorn was made, we sat down and watched 'Insidious'