Unknown Secrets/Birth By Sleep: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xXCrimsonWingXx, Dec 22, 2012.

  1. Pls leave any feedback here :) SirKD and I are doing different stories but in the same world. Hope u enjoy :3
     
  2. Thnx for supporting :)
     
  3. Prtty good write more
     
  4. Cool story bro. Keep telling it.
     
  5. It's alright. I feel like you could make the story longer posts. I honestly feel it's way too short and i want more.
     
  6. Srry, we'll fix that when we get the right amount of characters ;)
     
  7. Pls don't reply on the stories, thnx
     
  8. New chapter up ;D
     
  9. Ooooooh! I like both stories:). Are they related in some way? I'm just curious because they share a feedback thread.
     
  10. Yup ;) like ur story too :)
     
  11. Can I just start with the fact that the one by SirKD is a complete rip of the title of the Kingdom Hearts game for PSP, which is titled. "Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep"?
     
  12. Wtf is that? My friend gave me that title. Srry if I offended anyone :(
     
  13. Hey guys, we are making new threads for our stories for some complaints srry :(