Under my mask

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 19, 2010.

  1. Under my mask

    Under my mask, that I've crafted so perfectly,
    Lives a girl, so plain you would cry.

    Under a layer of fake laughter, and tears,
    Lives a girl, with her own oppinions.

    Wipe away the makeup and stare at my face,
    Of a girl, who wishes and dreams.

    Under those clothes, that I bought to look cool,
    Lives a girl, who hides her life.

    No one knows who I am, or how I'm feeling,
    What they see is a master illusion.

    If I'm feeling sad, no one cares,
    When I'm mad no one listens.

    I've crafted a mask, so perfect to hide behind, so that I no longer have to feel.

    I can't be who I want, I folow their rules,
    I follow the crowd, but underneath I care.

    I care that no one listens, I care about others,
    I care that my dreams have fallen.

    But I can't turn back, my mask is who I am,
    no one knows the real me, and no one ever will.
     
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  3. Whoa that was deep.  kinda sad but touching. How old r u?
     
  4. U ok? That was beautiful, though...
     
  5. dang.....
     
  6. Wow that was really good I'm 13 and can't rite like that
     
  7. WTF ur 12daaaaannnnnnngggg
     
  8. I usually don't like poems, but this was pretty good.

    Nice job.
     
  9. Nice poem lady!
     
  10. I new I'd recieve reactions like that!