████████████████████ Trapped inside a hansel kingdom: diary████████████████████ This is a diary of a brave kingdom, And tells the tales of what happened so long ago... September 20, 2011 The ruler's of the nations just ended pwars breaking hell loose in kaw! My build, an oaf, was not destroyed as an osfs might have been but I was on the hit list. The hit list was made by a group of hansels that made a list to hunt down all pwar noobs (only osf and oaf side though)! Once I found out I quickly build spy building but it was to late, a hansel called (insert your name) swiftly bribed my allies to leave my aid and the war started. Almost as quickly as the war started the hansel over powered my troops. Although, the battle was bloody and left a most dark assassins spewing blood on the first path. My army was escorted to (insert name)'s kingdom and war taken to the dark, moss filled dungeon. Doors locked and and the key thrown away, not a great sign to ever see light again. September 21, 2011 If (insert name) though they would get away with this well they have under estimated the power of a oaf. Yes, I have a plan ,simple, but effective enough to escape... BAMB, BAMB, BAMB the castle wall splintered open, thanks to our dragon rider. Less than 5,000 of my troops instantly shuffled through the castle (no not like in part rock) and planted spells to bomb the castle and disarm it. The rest quickly (if they didn't go quickly the explosion would kill them) and watched in awe as the castle lit up in fireworks...but then the dark assassins came. In the moon light my army and I could barely make out the faint outline of there dark suits but an outline was enough to kill. Our dragon took flight with me on it's back and I used spells, constant landing to fight hand to hand, and using my hight advantage to launch arrows. On the ground it was surprisingly silent, but deep in battle. The assassins dodged in and out of my troops slicing there bodies to pieces, we could only last so long. I made a decision fast to create a circle out of my army and barrel towards the highlands. Our number rate was still decreasing more than there's but not as much , we had a chance! A tier four level three steel Titan rises with the sun. One by one my army sees the problem and I know we can't fight out way out. I FLEW down and picked up as many soldiers as I could possibly handle and darted towards the highlands! The Titan tried grabbing us but the dragon simply dodged the attack. September 22, 2011 I rose to find the battle of yesterday gone and the highlands straight ahead. We made it! After a long one day war I had WON. Unlike the Dark guilds in the low lands the highlands was a bright, cheerful place that glittered with new blood. We settles and started to work, what do you expect for us to have perfect homes already made? Well we didn't but soon our troops regained and next time the fight will be ours!
Nice story. Some parts need to be edited for grammar (ironic since you ARE a grammar unicorn) but overall pretty good
@imaboss I believe your right I quickly glanced over and fixed a couple but not all, don't worry it will be fixed very soon.
LOL. You know I'm kidding. Pretty good, although I suggest using your writing talent for another cause.. xD BTW -- shouldn't this be fan fict?
The reason it's not in fan fic is because I think those stories aren't on active topics. I may be wrong...
Do you think the oaf should have survived or not? He was a pwar noob but otherwise he would rot in hell.