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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rainkeeper, Jul 8, 2010.

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  1. I'm not a writer and this is my first story. Applications for characters will be reviewed. Traitor
    Please leave comments.

    **Night Warrior Co. is for bloody, action books.**
     
    #1 Rainkeeper, Jul 8, 2010
  2. Can I be in your story?
     
    #2 *P-N-a-Y-Raizen (01), Jul 8, 2010
  3. Sure, but use the format.

    Name:
    Age:
    Occupation:
    Weapon:
    Personality:
     
    #3 Rainkeeper, Jul 8, 2010
  4. ** This update is for some explanation which I probably screwed up :p **
     
    #4 Rainkeeper, Jul 8, 2010
  5. Name: Cyrus
    Race: Elf
    Occupation: freelance ranger(mercinary)
    age: 16
    Weapons: Elven longbow, throwing knives and a katana
    Personaility: quiet, resourceful, sarcastic,

    btw pls don't kill me off really quick I'd like to stick around for a bit
     
    #5 *Cyrus_The_Warmaster (01), Jul 8, 2010
  6. Lol ok.
     
    #6 Rainkeeper, Jul 8, 2010
  7. No name gender or age. Be wise . It's all over the News
     
    #7 *BearArms (01), Jul 8, 2010
  8. Hahaha! I love it! You put me in as a rogue huh? That's pretty cool. Thanks Bro!

    iZaln
     
    #8 Nlaz, Jul 8, 2010
  9. Nickname:pedobear
    race: no one knows
    age:58
    occupation:retired
    hobbies: pedobear's hobbies r tracking down young teens and getting nude picks of young teen over the Internet
     
    #9 CaptinPeanut, Jul 8, 2010
  10. PP, don't mess up TNO's story, seriously. It's not really funny.

    iZaln
     
    #10 Nlaz, Jul 8, 2010
  11. Name: Bakeel
    Age:19
    Occupation: Knight
    Weaons: Two-hande blade, Foxbane.
    Personality: Quiet, swift, and serious.
    Look: long hair. Its spiky. Where's light clothing, brown hair and eyes.
     
    #11 Marodo, Jul 8, 2010
  12. Umm way to copy? Lol
     
    #12 Bastion, Jul 8, 2010
  13. ?
     
    #13 Marodo, Jul 8, 2010
  14. Not you he made his own co and well pretty much copied everything
     
    #14 Bastion, Jul 8, 2010
  15. Yea thts true
     
    #15 Marodo, Jul 8, 2010
  16. Can I be a young ranger squire??
     
    #16 Shadow_4920, Jul 8, 2010
  17. Avril
    18
    nurse 
    handgun
    crazy and fun
     
    #17 Angel-of-Meth, Jul 8, 2010
  18. I am HIOUP /13/ranger night/sword/protective and loyal
     
    #18 Shadow_4920, Jul 8, 2010
  19. Angel
    Demon
    Assassin
    fire sword extendable daggers and a summoning book
     
    #19 *AngelsEnigma (01), Jul 8, 2010
  20. And 18
     
    #20 *AngelsEnigma (01), Jul 8, 2010
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