Throned/Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Marodo, Aug 19, 2010.

  1. The official Throned feedback thread, tell me how u like the story an sneak peaks and u can give suggestions on how to
    make my story better, thnx for ur time!
     
  2. O btw ill be posting the new characters met in each chapter. And im gonna be gone for two days so ill prob have at least two chaps done by sunday or late night saturday.
     
  3. It's awesome so far! Love the suspense.
     
  4. Lol thx there's not much suspense but i forgot to add tht they r all like 12-13 here so they arent tht smart and experienced
     
  5. O btw i dunno if i said already but, im leaving for two days (vacation) so ill proba finish a chap or two on the story
     
  6. Awesome job!
     
  7. Are there going to be like temples of me in the Hydranti place or something?
     
  8. Yea but i cant reveal what thwy look like or what happens there, yr gonna have to wait until sunday to find chapter 1
     
  9. SACRAFICE! TO THE UTHO THE DARK AND JUST GOD!
     
  10. Bck from vacation woot woot!!!
     
  11. Where is the story?
     
  12. Its gonna be up soon
     
  13. Moar pls!

    iZ
     
  14. Awesome job!!!!
     
  15. Moar? Lol
     
  16. Yes Moar. Here's the Dictionary Def

    Moar (mōr)
    (a word) it is a mixture of "more" and "oar"
    it means that you will be hit with an oar for more of your story.

    iZ
     
  17. Chapter 2 up!