this is the story of how I died

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *rose_tyler_the_companion (01), Jun 25, 2012.

  1. .this is the story of how I died
    .it was stormy it never rains here that is when I knew something was wrong very wrong I ignored the feeling and continued walking home I turned a corner into an alley I thought I saw something in the corner of my eye "it's nothing"I tell myself I see something else move I pull my hood up on my hoodie and jog home. When I get there I jiggle the lock with my key the door finally opens I sigh and lay on my couch I take a nap. I wake up to the breaking news jingle of the news channel. I am shocked about what it says next.

    Guys this is my first story please no hate
     
  2. PARAGRAPHS!
    GRAMMAR!
     
  3. PUNCTUATION!!!
     
  4. Hmm...
    I remember this from somewhere...


    Oh yeah 
    My kindergarten English test.
    It said above it:

    Punctuate the following crap,
     
  5. What did the news say?