The X state Chat room. Comments a questions and more!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lord_Zethor, Dec 22, 2010.

  1. So how do you like it? Brand new!
     
  2. Use quotation marks next time. Or some kind of similar punctuation at least.
     
  3. Thx and I will.
     
  4. What star said
     
  5. Isn't this like the third story ur writing at one time
     
  6. Description is definitely needed. We need to see the setting. We need to see what the characters look like. However weave it into the story. Dont make a whole paragraph about it. During the dialogue, try and give the characters a little more movement and personality.

    For example, X looked at G, an arrogant smirk on his face, "I can be underwater longer than any human could dream of... Ect."

    G rolled his eyes and muttered under his breath, "You don't have to be so cocky!"
     
  7. The X state is based off of what? Can you guess?
     
  8. Hey people. Like my story?