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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010.

  1. Do not post on story post here with comments criticesm etc. I wil update when chapters o up
     
    #1 manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010
  2. *update chapter 1 up*
     
    #2 manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010
  3. Good mysterious effect at the end
     
    #3 Godsninja13, Sep 5, 2010
  4. **update chapter 2 is up sorry it took 2 posts I accidently hit submit
     
    #4 manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010
  5. Errmm there are some mistakes but its ok
     
    #5 *mcGreen (01), Sep 5, 2010
  6. Keep up the good work maybe some awesome melée battles could make it be best
     
    #6 Chocolate_Milk2, Sep 5, 2010
  7. I m not gonna give it away but dint worry I got ya covered on that
     
    #7 manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010
  8. Can't wait
     
    #8 Chocolate_Milk2, Sep 5, 2010
  9. "Yes i agree Said gods"  lol
     
    #9 *mcGreen (01), Sep 5, 2010
  10. Doing good man just work on grammactical errors an you'll b fine
     
    #10 german_idiot, Sep 5, 2010
  11. Also let ur characters get hurt
     
    #11 Chocolate_Milk2, Sep 5, 2010
  12. Ok I'm starting overt cuz of allthe spelling errors and grammar so il b posting it in a few after the editing is done
     
    #12 manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010
  13. Ok man
     
    #13 german_idiot, Sep 5, 2010
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