The unforgivens feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010.

  1. So im starting over because my speeling was pretty bad last time an i wanted t fix a few things in it also any posts in the story will result in being stripped so plz dont do
    it
     
    #1 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  2. Ok
     
    #2 german_idiot, Sep 8, 2010
  3. Chapter 1s up chapter 2 will b up shortly
     
    #3 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  4. My dude still in it
     
    #4 german_idiot, Sep 8, 2010
  5. Not yet but I can't give anything away
     
    #5 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  6. Cool does he still hav a m416
     
    #6 german_idiot, Sep 8, 2010
  7. Chapter 2s up
     
    #7 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  8. Bump
     
    #8 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  9. Bump
     
    #9 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  10. #10 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  11. Bumpp
     
    #11 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  12. Buuuuump
     
    #12 manbearpig5, Sep 8, 2010
  13. Hey man don't bump this too much only of it gets on the third page
     
    #13 german_idiot, Sep 8, 2010
  14. Its good but did Iwrite check it? Still some mistakes in it
     
    #14 *mcGreen (01), Sep 8, 2010
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