The unforgivens and iwrite co production

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by manbearpig5, Sep 5, 2010.

  1. Looking down, the 4 men saw the ocean rushing beneath them, as their choper flew over. They were 5 of the most elite, most skilled men around. They all had once worked for a government espionage agency. Then they quit and formed a mercenary group, hired around for deeds. They were known as the unforgivens. Slowly the choper Began to descend, and the men moved out. Gods mbp mcgreen and foute moved toward the main building of the oil platform. It was an easy mission in and out grab it and go, or so they thought.
     
  2. Mbp found te door and kicked it down yelling " go go go!!" all 4 ran in and found 2 different hallways. "What should we do?" asked mcgreen. Let's all go right that's what the mission plan was. The began moving down the Hallway cautiously, unsure what to expect. They came to an office room with the words bjornd office. Thy broke down the door and found a safe. Mbp used the walkietalkie and called the base " okay we found the safe, how do we get in?" the response was short and simple " foutes." foutes moved forward "ok guys step back" and began setting up a chunk of c-4. He flipped a switch and said " get ready" an ran bak. Then the c-4 went off, an explosion of fire and smoke and when it cleared there was a little piece of paper in it. Mbp grabbed it and radioed the base "k we got it send in chopper at the rally point." And
     
  3. They bagan running toward it mcgreen looked surprised "wow this was really easy" "yes I agree said gods" then they heard something, a pop and a groan. And suddenly the thought of an easy mission was erased from their heads