The Train Wreck Mystery

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Oct 30, 2010.

  1. Do NOT post on this thread! I will farm you and if I'm too weak I have tons of other great people who will stand up for me and will be able to farm you! So think twice!
    -Arimay
    The Train Wreck Mystery
    (relistic fiction)
    By: Arimay


    The Train Wreck Mystery
    Chapter One:

    "Good bye my love!" Edward had kissed his sweety Rose goodbye. They both hugged eachother tightly at the train station, Edward in a hurry or else he would miss his train. Edward and Rose were madly in love. Rose was a rich, young girl with beautiful flowing locks of red hair and just a brown mole that complemented her lips which were a shaded a red lip stick.
    "Promise you'll come catch the next train as soon as you relise your job has been done!" Rose had called over the loud noises of trains rolling in.
    "I promise!" yelled Edward. Edward had worked at a bank and had to take a long business trip far, far away. He had married Rose a while ago and they just couldn't live without eachother. It was hard for each to let go to eachother just for a bit. Edward had gotten on the train and mouthed the words I love you just before slipping through the door, Rose had mouthed the same words and smiled and had waved goodbye. Fixing her hat and starting to walk off she heard somebody call from the train.
    "Rose! Come here!" she turned to see Edward to the back of the train waving his hands signaling her she needed to come over. She walked behind the train a met with him.
    "What now, Edward?" she asked smiling a bright smile.
    "I'll write you letters, if I'm stuck in my work for months." he said smilig back at her.
    "Were already filthy rich, why do you have to go?" she asked wiping away her smile.
    "To put some adventure between us." he said wiping away his smile too, but Rose, she felt as if he already didn't need her anymore. She felt lonely and sick to hear this. Edward starred at her than climbed over the small fence holding Edward inside the train, he leaned down and pressed his hand on her cheak and kissed her.
    "Please, don't be sad I love you." he said hopefully.
    "Alright, be back soon, and I love you too." Rose said smearing a smile across her face once again.
    "I promise." said Edward grasping the fence bars as the train started to roll across the tracks then he slipped over the fence once again lifting his hat and wavig it at his love. Rose had lifted her foot up and started to walk off, suddenly her other foot was caught in between the tracks bars.
    "Oh my." she said sighing than tugging her foot, the shoe wouldn't budge. She tryed again this time harder, more power, but still her shoe wouldn't move a bit. She had gotten annoyed this time and pulled harder, once again it didn't come out. But then jus out of the crisp air came out a whistle, a whistle from a train. She turned and froze and just down the hill, up rose a ginormous train speeding down it's tracks, just then she had relised she was right in it's way. She quickly pulled and pulled shaking frantic relising that she was to die. She quickly pulled up her dress knowing there was no hope tugging at her foot and reached for her boot laces and tried to untie but it was too late. Rose had been killed.
     
  2. R ya gona farm me now
     
  3. Wats wrong with u arimay, u get too upset over little things.
     
  4. Yeah... don u like if ppl comment ur thread??


    anyways



    Do ONE post and edit it whille u imagin the new chapter o_O
     
  5. I don't like ifn ppl comment on my story, but I don't flip out!
     
  6. We all gona get farmed now lol
     
  7. I could give 2 1/2 shlts less.
     
  8. I'm'ma goin sleepin ...
     
  9. Ive read the first line of the text and its like ... How you call it? Homo