The Train Wreck Mystery Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Oct 30, 2010.

  1. Please write feedback on the train wrec mystery here. Thanks!
     
    #1 *arimay (01), Oct 30, 2010
  2. It sucks -_____-
     
    #2 Shifter, Oct 30, 2010
  3. Wats it about
     
    #3 SLIM-SHADY, Oct 30, 2010
  4. Boy and girl are in love girl dies than boy has to find out how she died.
     
    #4 *arimay (01), Oct 30, 2010
  5. Good start I guess. It sounds like it has potential... Keep writing!
     
    #5 Storallelite, Oct 31, 2010
  6. Ill be impressed if it's better than the westing game. And just curious, but why do all your stories include a romance in it?
     
    #6 *Kimber03 (01), Oct 31, 2010
  7. I don't really like love stories maybe u should try somptin with action
     
    #7 *kAILY1 (01), Oct 31, 2010
  8. Speaking of train wrecks...
     
    #8 *Gen_Spartan (01), Oct 31, 2010
  9. You completely explained how she died. What's to find out?
     
    #9 *Ipitydahooka (01), Oct 31, 2010
  10. Sorry but it isn't a mystery if the girl died cos she got her shoe stuck so I'm very sorry but

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    I'm real sorry
     
    #10 iNath, Oct 31, 2010
  11. #11 *arimay (01), Nov 1, 2010
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