This is a Portal fan fiction. It will be in several parts. Even if you dont like Portal or other VALVe games, please read~ and Portal and VALVe are not mine, soo... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I woke up in a cool, dark room. "Where...am I?" was my first thought. "Ahh, welcome back. How...nice..to see you again." A robotic voice greeted coldly over an intercom. I shakily woke up, looking at everything, examining evrything in sight. Then it struck me: I was back in Aperture Laboratories. "Crap. Why must this happen to me?" I thought out loud. I looked around more. Glass of water...coffee cup...portal gun.......PORTAL GUN! I picked up my old weapon, and a portal opened leading out of the Relaxation Chamber. "Are you ready, my 'friend'", GLaDOS's voice said. "to begin testing?" I thought for a minute, then stepped through the portal. I've killed her before...I'll kill her again.
And this is my first fanfic. And, although you incinerated him, i will Include that loveable block of geometrical goodness that is the Companion Cube.
Nobody murdered me, or put me in a potato, or fed me to birds.. I had a good life. Until you showed up, you dangerous, mute lunatic. -GLaDOS
Being Caroline taught me a valuable lesson. I thoight you were my enemy, but it turns out you were my best friend. That surge of energy that shot throigh me taugt me a more important lesson: where Caroline lives in my brain. *deletes Caroline* [Male Voice] Caroline deleted. [GLaDOS] Good bye, Caroline... -GLaDOS
UPDATE: "The Test Subject, Chapter 2" will most likely be longer than this and will take serious planning, As im a so-called "noob" at writing fanfictions.
Wow your really good at writing. Like really good. But there are some things: •it does depend on the writer, but normally, when you write what a character is thinking, 'you use these marks', "not these". As you well know, the latter is for speech. Not thoughts, but it is an independent opinion there. •when doing thought too, usually you do a new paragraph, as you do with speech. •use paragraphs more. It is good, and you do use them, but sometimes it's quite confusing reading a 10-sentence long block. Hope this helps, just some grammatical errors, but a fantastic book!
Er, well, I only made it so short because my Ipod was going to die, and I made it up as i went along..