The story of the troll king (comments)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 12, 2012.

  1. Please post your comments on my story here.
     
    #1 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 12, 2012
  2. It sucked
     
    #2 CHAOS_ASSASSIN, Jun 12, 2012
  3. Thanks.
     
    #3 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 12, 2012
  4. Np
     
    #4 CHAOS_ASSASSIN, Jun 13, 2012
  5. ＼(^o^)／awesome story dude can't wait for the sequel.
     
    #5 *-IRONDAGER- (01), Jun 13, 2012
  6. Thanks. *wondering what to write the sequel about
     
    #6 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 13, 2012
  7. It was pretty good I mean but not to much plot or description I think you could do more if you came up with a background story. And it kinda just started out of nowhere make a prologue or a prequel just needs more
     
    #7 *-IRONDAGER- (01), Jun 13, 2012
  8. Ok. A prequel and a sequel... Kinda like Narnia...
     
    #8 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 13, 2012
  9. Bumping
     
    #9 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Jun 15, 2012
  10. Stop. Everyone can see it on the front page. Noob.
     
    #10 FeatherHunter, Jun 16, 2012
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