The Story Of Icarus Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Smighter89, Jun 15, 2011.

  1. So.. My first story :3 Please tell me your honest feedback. Story thread link: Next post.
     
    #1 Smighter89, Jun 15, 2011
  2. #2 Smighter89, Jun 15, 2011
  3. Love it.....I wanna play butts up..
     
    #3 Eagleking, Jun 16, 2011
  4. Congrats on your first story... Scary ain't it?
     
    #4 *iPimella (01), Jun 17, 2011
  5. A little. :3 Afraid everyone is gonna hate it.
     
    #5 Smighter89, Jun 17, 2011
  6. Nah
     
    #6 Eagleking, Jun 17, 2011
  7. No idea what butts up is the story is good
     
    #7 bellalautner, Jun 19, 2011
  8. New chapter!
     
    #8 Smighter89, Jun 21, 2011
  9. Great
     
    #9 Eagleking, Jun 21, 2011
  10. Bump for peoples.
     
    #10 Smighter89, Jul 19, 2011
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