The Sound of Blood: Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011.

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  1. All forms of feedback about the Sound of Blood belong here, whether praise or criticism.

    All discussions about the story are to be held on this thread as well.

    I wasn't sure how to write the prologue, but now I think I made the right decision with the birth of Violet being the prologue.

    The Sound of Blood
    The Sound of Blood: Sign Ups
     
    #1 FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011
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    #2 *iPimella (01), Oct 16, 2011
  3. Aren't I awesome? I wasn't sure if everyone knew what pulchritudinous meant, so I was a little apprehensive about putting that word in the story.

    Violet and Dimitri will be the main characters. Dimitri is not on the sign up list, but is a character I made.
     
    #3 FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011
  4. Cool! This should be interesting 
     
    #4 *iPimella (01), Oct 16, 2011
  5. Yep!
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011
  6. This story seems to be very interesting :D
     
    #6 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 16, 2011
  7. Chapter One should be up today.
     
    #7 FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011
  8. I liked the story so far.
     
    #8 matzah, Oct 16, 2011
  9. Thanks. I'm not sure where the story will end, but I've got the rising action and the climax planned.
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, Oct 16, 2011
  10. Interesting.

    Looking forward to chapter 1 :D
     
    #10 Bonfifi, Oct 16, 2011
  11. It's boring..........







    put a battle tank or two in it....
     
    #11 Renatum, Oct 17, 2011
  12. lol wrong story. haven't read this one.
     
    #12 Renatum, Oct 17, 2011
  13. Chapter one up.
     
    #13 FeatherHunter, Oct 17, 2011
  14. All the guys assumed porno? Woe
     
    #14 *iPimella (01), Oct 17, 2011
  15. Wow**

    (Grammar unicornZ)
     
    #15 *iPimella (01), Oct 17, 2011
  16. The usual sex education attitude for males.

    Did you like it?
     
    #16 FeatherHunter, Oct 17, 2011
  17. Ouch thats a mean assumption.

    Yes, I liked it, but there isnt really enough to see where this would go... so ill be the first one to say this here.

    MOAR
     
    #17 matzah, Oct 17, 2011
  18. Yes! I got a moar! ALL IN CAPS!
     
    #18 FeatherHunter, Oct 17, 2011
  19. I really like the story.
    You do a very good job with describing the feelings of Violet :)

    Keep it up :D
     
    #19 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 18, 2011
  20. I've postponed all other stories of mine till I finish this one. I'm writing this one so that I can expand a little into the girl PoV. Whenever I look at my stories and go to a point where it's through a girl's PoV, it always seems... /).-

    But with a guy PoV... (>^.^)>readers<(^.^<)
     
    #20 FeatherHunter, Oct 18, 2011
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