Waaaaaay too short, the way you make the characters speak is kind of annoying, and it's not descriptive enough. I can tell you're trying to write a story, but there's just no... Substance. Also, you switched between present and past tense halfway through, and made a few spelling errors. I suggest using a thesaurus to get words to spice it up, and make the characters talk more like they should a story. Sqaude of this race - Herp de derp that there is not how they should speak, unless you're writing a play. "Sjwkxbaksie," Xajswn said, "we need to save the princess and skelsow." that is more with the flow of the writing style you're using. And one last thing: You introduced us to what was going on, but there's still no point of reference. I had no idea what the Guardian was, or who the people were, and "what will happen to us now?" seems really out of place. I'm not trying to offend you, there's a lot of potential in that story, but you're not giving it that edge that makes a story great. Please, take my advice, and I assure you, your writing quality will increase tenfold.
I understand your point, I strive to do better. I am relativly new at making stories, and I will explain everything later in the later chapters. I used the type of speech because I thought it would be easier to comprehend that way. The Chapters will get longer later. i will add descrition to the characters too. Just let me get there.