The soldier

This is my first draft made on spot
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Hi my name is stanely watkins I've been in the marine core for 8 years my ranking is commander and I have my own squad of seven our first mission is to go into a top secret radioactive plant to blow the place up into flames read chapter one to see how it goes

 

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chpt.1 stanely is a tall brown haired blue eyed musclar 29 year old he's been in the Maine core since he was 21 his first pack mission was approved and they were gearing up for the plane ride to the radioactive plant Stanely made his announcement to his pack okay this is what's happening I need you three to go in the back and set a box of c4s by were the weapons are produced and you three come with me the time you put in is 5 minutes once there planted get out and the plane will be exactly where we land any questions " I have one " what is it. How will we get in and will anyone be there well we will pick the doors kill the few people in there and we go home to are wives got it men YES SIR k let's go who rah stanely stepped into a plane last after his men 5 hours later it was time 23 hundred they got off the plane everyone exept stanely was shaking stanely put a cigar in his mouth and lit it up the three wLked to the back and stanely and the other three walked the the front he picked the door when instantly a man was pointing a pistol a him stanely said hell there fast one of the soldiers behind him took out his gun silently then boom instantly the man was was bleeding on the floor good work private stanely grinned and he through his cigar away then they walked to a very tall pipe and planted a box of c4s and put it down then right when the timer was set a loud voice throughout the building said lockdown intruders lockdown intruders stanely took his men into a dark corner and took out his microphone and said private group one did you make it out. A strange voice came out they'll never make it out watkins