Should I right more did I do good and what u thought it's my first story ever so plz don't be to mean
I thought it was interesting, maybe needs a little work with the dialogue, but just FYI in case you didn't know, most if not all snipers do not go for supposed, "head shots". The kill zones are around the chest area, nowhere near the head or between the eyes.
Maka is right, no sniper goes for a head shot, it's a good story but work on grammer and sentance structure
Modern snipers now aim for the spine of the brain which makes a T shape from where your neck ends and your head starts at the back!! Sorry if I'm wrong, but this is a common spot for snipers only now they could shoot any where and get a kill
Not too bad if ur on iPod/iPhone use the notes section so u can edit bfore posting and just work on punctuation and minor grammactical stuff and you'll b fine
Like I said go work on story in notes app on iPod/iPhone and do more research on military weapons bfore writing a military novel cause a Barrett .50cal is actually meant for antiarmor not flesh and bones try an m40a3 i think it's standard issue for US military and it's more believable other than that ur doing fine
Yes, an M40A3 is standard military issue, and also my rifle of choice. I have all the specs memorized for my customized version.
That's not the point man I don't mind ya using it but it's just that some ppl think it can hit a kajillion miles away just cause of cod