Beginning of a prologue I've been working on for a novel perhaps if every find the time. First post every in any part of forum, would really appreciate any comments
I failed the speed reading course at dorsey schools.. scanned it so fast, my eyeballs did an upside down barrel roll, and rolled out onto the floor..... so still working on it....
PARAGRAPHS! If you seperate those long chunks, Readers will be more tempted to read, and it wil look nicer.