The Secret King: Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Apr 19, 2011.

  1. There are no sign ups and all the events in this book are real!
    I'm writing a Non-Fiction!

    I accept all criticism, good or bad.

    Story Link:

    The Secret King
     
    #1 FeatherHunter, Apr 19, 2011
  2. Awesome story JayW keep up the great work buddy!! :)
     
    #2 *LadyJtwixy1014 (01), Apr 19, 2011
  3. Hmm non-fiction, I'm interested!
     
    #3 Storallelite, Apr 19, 2011
  4. LadyJ goes to my school, so she will soon be in it!
     
    #4 FeatherHunter, Apr 20, 2011
  5. Fail mc failpants it's so bad I dint even wanna post on it
     
    #5 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 20, 2011
  6. Why do you continually try and mess with fanfic?
     
    #6 FeatherHunter, Apr 20, 2011
  7. It's the only intertwinement here
     
    #7 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 21, 2011
  8. *intertainment but really it is bad
     
    #8 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 21, 2011
  9. My story IS NOT bad.
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, Apr 21, 2011
  10. Your opinion not mine
     
    #10 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 22, 2011
  11. Whatever...maybe if you don't like it, you could leave. :D
     
    #11 FeatherHunter, Apr 23, 2011
  12. No I think I'l stay for some wine
     
    #12 *IRONhulk (01), Apr 23, 2011
  13. Well he's not really secret if ur telling ppl bout him...
     
    #13 -Pixel-, Apr 23, 2011
  14. wow...you don't understand yet
     
    #14 FeatherHunter, Apr 24, 2011
  15. …
     
    #15 *TheBlackRage (01), Apr 24, 2011
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