warning do not read if you have not read "the secret island." As Jim-bob awakes from his sleep he hears voices. They are getting louder and louder. Soon a head looks down in the pit. It's a scraggly, tough looking pirate dude. He says "hey we got food for the day boys!!" The crew replies "whoo". Jim-bob is terrified now. The pirates lower a rope down into the pit. A pirate jumps down and ties Jim-bob to the rope. They hoist him up. As they lead him to their underground houses Jim starts to think of ways he can escape. Nothing comes to mind. In their houses their are giant knives, roasting pits, and all the other house hold items you would find. They take him to their captain. The captain gives Jim a challenge he says," I am going to have 20 men watch you. They will shoot you. But you can choose where they stand. If you are still alive at sun rise you can go home." Jim-bob accepts the challenge and they lead him away. Jim says for them to stand in a circle around him. Everyone is scared to shoot, because they might shoot each other. At sunrise Jim-bob is still alive. The captain comes in and says congratulations you have stayed alive. The captain then whispers in Jim-bob's ear," I'm a liar" and stabs him in the chest. But the knife hit off a rib, bounced back, and killed the captain. Jim-bob grabs a pirate's gun and shoots everyone. He goes home and tells his mother the whole story. Jim then wakes up. It was all a dream.
@cheese Ima new writer. I start out slow and work longer. @rhino this was gonna be one post but I accidently hit the post button
this wont be so bad if you didn't just use one post and call it a story, write more like 20 in different genres and you are more likely to be better, also do is over time like a story every night, every week or when you can write, people are never satisfied with an empty plate so why do you feed that to us?