The School Days; Feedback and reviews.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by IXx_Exodus_xXI, Jan 14, 2012.

  1. This is my return to writing, I plan to finish this story. If the reviews by my fellow writers and readers are of a positive vibe I may continue to write other stories. (Or write a carry on, depends on the ending I choose)

    Thank you, hope you enjoy my pride and joy xD
     
    #1 IXx_Exodus_xXI, Jan 14, 2012
  2. .
     
    #2 Robot_Lord_of_Tokyo, Jan 14, 2012
  3. Nice ^_^
     
    #3 IXx_Exodus_xXI, Jan 14, 2012
  4. Good but you over used the boy's name.
     
    #4 Storallelite, Jan 17, 2012
  5. Thank you Stora, much appreciated 
     
    #5 IXx_Exodus_xXI, Jan 17, 2012
  6. Np :)
     
    #6 Storallelite, Jan 17, 2012
(You must log in or sign up to post here.)