The Rising

It was a normal day in Paris, the cars honking at each other, traffic stopped up. Except for the man shuffling through the alleys. To the casual observer, he was dressed right. It was a cold day, and most people were in doors. The person was wearing an overcoat, with a gray fedora covering his eyes and face.

 

This is a retry, and honestly, my last one. If you guys would give me a chance, it could turn out better.
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He shuffled in and out of alleys. He kept his white gloves on while shuffling through them. The building looming ahead of him was spired, red brick showing through the bright blue sky. The building read: Enoch Enterprises. He kept walking, and reached the door, raising a gloved hand to knock. But the door slid open automaticlly, and the man stumbled in surprise. He walked in, and a woman at the desk asked him, "What is your buisness here?" The man replied, "Bravo 3 Johnny 9 Vulcan 20." The woman nodded and pressed a concealed button.

 

The white elevator slid open, concealed within the white walls. The room was dimly lit, but the white walls reflected the light, making it a whole lot brighter than normal. He walked in, then pressed the floor button 34, and the elevator lurched. That's when the cable snapped, and he fell screaming, and in that last moment, he knew it was his master's doing.

 

SR, yes, couldn't think of another name.
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The light shown through the dim orange window, and then the sound pierced the calm. Josh's hand slapped on the Snooze button, but he was wide awake now. He got up and went over to wake Diana, but she was up too. They both walked down the stairs to the kitchen, the smell of green tea wafting through the air.
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More coming, but gotta do something.

 

Their parents, Julie and Scott, were waiting at the ornate table. The kettle was on the stove, and as usual, their dad was reading the news. The headline read: Purposely or Accident? We both walked to pick up the kettle, which was steaming. Josh picked it up and poured everybody a glass.

 

Not doing that. I can promise you. If you want that POV (Point of View) then you can. But it won't be.
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They sat down, and their dad told them what was in the news. "Apparently, there was an accident in the Enoch Enterprises building. The authorities aren't sure if it WAS on accident." Then their dad put down the newspaper and sipped his tea. The breakfast was bacon, scrambled eggs, with hashbrowns. The drink was tea as usual. Diana picked at her food, not looking very hungry. Josh was wolfing his down.