The red sea's - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011.

  1. This is the feedback thread for my upcoming story, feel free to post what you think about it...

    What do you think will happen? Speculate!
     
    #1 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011
  2. TRS for short :)
     
    #2 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011
  3. I think someone important might get killed during a sea battle and it sets off a whole chain of events.

    iZaln
     
    #3 Nlaz, Jul 3, 2011
  4. Blood runs into the sea?
     
    #4 FeatherHunter, Jul 3, 2011
  5. Loads of battles, blood, killing, death, gore....
     
    #5 Storallelite, Jul 3, 2011
  6. Little hint: how can u kill something if it's already dead?
     
    #6 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011
  7. When u write dead I think Pirates of the carribean
     
    #7 Storallelite, Jul 3, 2011
  8. No... That's copyright stora 
     
    #8 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011
  9. Well I know but u said dead and killing...so I thought pirates of the carribean 
     
    #9 Storallelite, Jul 3, 2011
  10. Well I'm gonna change that so when you hear pirates you think of my story 
     
    #10 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 3, 2011
  11. We'll see
     
    #11 Storallelite, Jul 3, 2011
  12. I can't did the red seas story:( what page is it on?
     
    #12 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 3, 2011
  13. Nvrm it's not up lol
     
    #13 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 3, 2011
  14. Bump
     
    #14 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 5, 2011
  15. Bump
     
    #15 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 6, 2011
  16. So far its Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
     
    #16 Eagleking, Jul 6, 2011
  17. Very interesting and mysterious beginning. Write more!
     
    #17 Storallelite, Jul 8, 2011
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