This is my first story I've ever written properly Please dint comment on here comment on the feedback thread There will probably be more in the series after I finish this one. Here goes: The quest: the blooming lily Prologue A misty shape appeared out of the shadows walking slowly towards a 14 year old girl. "hello lilly" said the shape in a mysterious voice "I've been waiting for you" "I'm confused" said lilly in a puzzled voice "I have been sent to pass in an important message to you" calmly said the shape. The shape stepped out of the shadows and Lilly saw that it had a human shape, but she still didn't know who it was. "You have been chosen by the gods to go on a quest"whispered the mysterious person " but why me? I'm only a normal 14 year old girl" asked Lilly "because you are special, you have been chosen out of millions by the gods to go on this quest it is an honour" replied the human. Lilly thought for a moment then said " fine then…I'll do it ,but what do I have to do?" asked Lilly softly "you have to travel across far land and seas to save Anitha's, a land built of magic, there will be magical creatures there, but there will also be bad like assassins and spy's trying to stop you" replied the person " in the future they will be terrorised by dragons ,but they don't know that yet. You need to go and save Anitha's You will be rewarded if you do" " okay but how will I find this land your talking about?"asked Lilly. But it was to late, the person had already began to melt into the shadows untill only it's eyes were viewable. Then it all went black.
Hoped you liked the prologue please post feedback on the feedback thread. Heres the next part: Chapter 1 Lilly woke with a start And could just hear her mum calling her "Lilly get up it's time for school and your not even dressed! Hurry up!!!!" her mum shouted up the stairs. Lilly climbed out of bed sleepily rubbing her eyes, she quickly got dressed and walked down the stairs. " finally your up there's only 10 minutes till you have to leave" said her mum " allright I'm up now okay" yawned Lilly. She quickly made breakfast and shoveled it down, she checked if she had her phone and her key, then she set off for school. When she got there she started to wonder if she should tell her friends about the dream, after awile she decided not to tell them just in case it was just a dream. She walked into the building and found her friends glancing around anxiously, when her friends saw her the stopped lookin around and ran over to Lilly. " we were worried about you" said kaija , lilly friend whom she met in year 3 " yeah you 5 minutes later than usual" said Alice "tut tut tut" said Annie Then all four of them burst out laughing and started to walk around to there lesson. When school had finished Lilly starte to walk home along the ally way when someone called her name, she turned around to see Jay, a boy in her class. "you've been acting strange today" said Jay " you can tell me what happened I'm a good secret keeper" Lilly wondered if she should tell him then said "ok then…" then she told Jay all about her dream and said "I have to go and search for it and I think I'm going tonight." Jay stopped and stood there for a while, after a minute he suddenly said " I'm coming to, I've never done anything exciting and my mum doesnt care what I do" " are you sure you want to come Jay it might be dangerous?"replied Lilly "Yes im coming and besides, you need a boy with you" said Jay " okay then meet outside the school at midnight and bring whatever you think your going to need, because this quest may take a while." whispered Lilly and they began to walk again. The Quest had began
The quest:the blooming lily Chapter 2 Lilly set her alarm clock to make sure she woke up at 11:30 so she could meet Jay outside the school. Lilly decided to take a bag of food, a small kitchen knife, a change of clothes and her dads old tent. When she finished packing she quickly hid the bags under her bed and and lay under the sheets. When the alarm went off Lilly quickly jumped out of bed, silently got dressed and picked up the bags. She quietly sneaked past her parents room and started to walk down the stairs. Suddenly the stair she had just stepped on gave a loud creak and Lilly stumbled down the rest of the stairs holding her breath, hoping no one had heard her. As soon as she reached the bottom she quietly opened the front door and walked into the darkness. When she got outside the school she anxiously waited for Jay, willing him to hurry. After 10 minutes Lilly saw Jays outline hurrying down the road towards her. "Sorry I'm late Lilly!" whispered Jay "my mum was downstairs for ages!" "It's okay, but I was getting scared" Lilly whispered back "let's get going". Lilly and Jay walked off side by side into the darkness.
The quest: the blooming lily Chapter 3 Lilly and Jay stopped in a small field for the night, Lilly put up the tent while Jay collected some things from the ground in the area around. When Lilly had put the tent up she set up her and Jays bed, Jay stuck his head through the opening then climbed in the tent. He was holding a range of different objects like: mushrooms, berries and flowers. Both of them climbed into their sleeping bags and fell asleep quickly. In the morning Lilly woke to find Jay sitting on his sleeping bag reading a book, Lilly glanced at the book and saw it was all about wild food and animals. "It's to see if those mushrooms and berries I got last night are safe to eat" said Jay, turning to Lilly "I borrowed it from my dad" " ok then, it will help us a lot" replied Lilly. She climbed out of her sleeping bag and sat next to Jay "where shall we go first?" Asked Lilly " dunno anywhere really" answered Jay