The poets lounge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Sep 5, 2010.

  1. Well we have the writers cafe and I write co but no where apart from colonials thread to be just poets and share with others so sit down the jazz is on and keep on writing 

    I'll post my newest poem first
     
  2. The flowing air
    The splashing seas
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    The glorious bear
    The rustling trees
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    Nothing on earth can rival you
    And things are outshone that used too
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    Any despite the things that people do 
    I will always know that I have you
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    The shining sun
    The great white stars
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    I know you are there
    And I long to find you 
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    When I do find you 
    I will never let you go 
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    My hopes and dreams are in fates hand now
    May they you to me 
    Nothing on earth compares to you

    And when we meet we will know 
    That soul mates we are
    Nothing in earth compares to you
     
  3. I like that poem zach, it's nice
     
  4. Thanks sis
     
  5. I'm sorry, but there is a poems thread...
     
  6. Already is a*
     
  7. It's just that no ones posted on it, and I'm beginning to think not many people on KaW appriciate poetry, and that statement is not directed at you, sorry if it sounds that way
     
  8. It's cool colonial no one likes me anyway
     
  9. Don't say that man, that's a goo poem you created
     
  10. Nice poem. I liked how you repeated the third line.
     
  11. Whispering willows
    Drooping branches falling low
    Rustling in the wind
     
  12. Like the poem bluejay it was beatiful, saying the third line at the end of every section was really good.
     
  13. I soar with the birds
    Looking down upon the world
    Never coming down
     
  14. Thanks guys also lady m you should write a full poem
     
  15. Sun and white stars aren't on earth :) so they compare
     
  16. I do right full poems
     
  17. U should post it here then