"The Ontait Order" Sneak-Peak

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by JJ_R, Dec 26, 2010.

  1. I will post the prouloge here. If you like it and think I should continue please post here. Thank you.






    The Ontait Order

    Prologue 
     
    My name is Jessica Smith and I'm a telepathic runaway. I was at an orphanage just 4 weeks ago. It wasnt just an orphanage though it was also a testing facility. We were forced to test any new products and by the end of the day we were practically dead. The only thing that kept myself and the four others alive was our powers. We were all sent there when our parents were killed in the raid on our town. Luckily we survived. Not so lucky we were sent here. I am somewhat of the leader of this group. There's Tj, Sara, Zack, Caliber, and myself. We each have special powers. Tj can talk to ghosts and he can make almost anything with his mind. Sara can talk to and take over animals. Zack can make anything come to life and control it. Caliber can control all the elements, fire, air, earth, and water. I have the power of telekinesis, meaning I can move things with my mind. I also can see into the future through visions and my dreams. They are like a family to me. They are the only things that keep the dream of escaping this place alive. The only thing keeping me alive.


    -Jessie
     
  2. me gives thumbs up.
    its cool.
    post more!
     
  3. Yes. Yes it is
     
  4. of course its PRETTYFUL!

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  5. Awesome, this is
     
  6. Bump for awesome
     
  7. It's ok, but learn to spell prologue.
     
  8. Sounds like an interesting beginning
     
  9. That was AWESOME!
     
  10. By the power of my new iPhone 4, I declare this EPIC.