The Next Generation

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by hjy213, Mar 16, 2012.

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  1. Some people call me a freak, others call me the one who will restore peace to out world, all because of my power. I can have any power I think about, hear about, or see. I call this power, a curse. Now I know what your thinking, why would I hate a power like this? Well, it may sound great, but trying to control this power is pure torture. Now my twin, he's a different story, he loves his powers, he can fly, teleport, and turn invisible. He would always use it to mess around with out mother, but not our father, he can see hidden things, turn invisible, and is a master of thievery, he used to use it for evil, but then he met my mom. She showed him to be a better person, so he became a hero, until 5 years ago in the year 2143, he failed to save thousands of people, and was shunned as a hero. Now it's my time for a story, the story of when my brother and I became the most powerful and most respected people on earth.

    Please give feedback for if I should make this into a story!
     
  2. If u would like more pls reply
     
  3. Why do you ask for people to ask you to continue? Aren't you writing for yourself? I've written whole fractions of stories with no feedback or commentary whatsoever.

    You came here to write? Then write, and don't ask for people to ask you to continue.
     
  4. I don't do it yet cuz I want to make sure ppl want more
     
  5. Who cares if they want more!? You are writing to IMPROVE yourself. People will read it either way, it's up to you to provide them with a good read.
     
  6. I care for ppl's opinions ok? Y not just leave me alone cheesemuffin?
     
  7. I'm just trying to help, no need to go off the handle.
     
  8. Ur helping?! How is criticizing me like u did HELPING?!
     
  9. I just want to make sure this is a story worth making ok?
     
  10. He is helping if you would care to listen and calm down
     
  11. Goodbye forums, I never want to do this again
     
  12. rawr :3
    somebody is angry.

    /lizznock
     
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