It was a rainy day when my life, as well as my brother's, changed. We were walking home from school when the so called hero Heracles saw us. "Well look at that! It's the wimp hero's twin boys." Heracles said. I could tell my brother Dallas wanted to hurt Heracles at that moment. "Don't hurt him!" I said to Dallas by telekinesis. "Oh come on Demus! He's insulting dad! Can't I hit him just once?!" Dallas replied. "No, but if he starts getting out of line I'll tell u when to attack, deal?" "Alright..." I could tell he was disappointed. "What are you girl scouts doing staring at each other? You're just as bad as that imbecile you call a father." Heracles mocked, "No, not imbecile, that NEANDERTHAL, he couldn't save anyone even if he tried to!" "Now?" Dallas asked in my mind. "Now." I answered. And we attacked. The next chapter will come out in a few days.
We don't do that here. It's ONE story thread, with multiple chapters on it in separate posts, not multiple threads with ONE chapter on it.
Just a bit of criticism... Telekinesis is moving things without touching them. Your looking for telepathy