The magic crystal feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 5, 2010.

  1. I know I'm writing alot of stories at the moment, but I REALLY like this one! Tell me what you think, good and bad reviews welcome!

    -Lady
     
  2. This story is interesting so far! I like how u use 2 different point of views, and the plot seems very interesting. This seems like a very suspenceful story, because with the power of the crystal u could do anything. Save the magic world or destroy it. This seems like a very interesting story and I will defiantly keep my eyes on it.
     
  3. It's truly interesting. But don't get in the habit of writing alot of stories at once! Ur stories r awesome but, u might get over booked and get the plots mixed up.
     
  4. Pretty good so far. It reminds me of another book called The Alchemyst and did you base the fairy part on Artemis Fowl?
     
  5. It will be okay, I have the app simple mind, and it helps me keep battle camp organized, and if that's organized, so is everything else! (my life kind of revolves around battle camp!)
     
  6. Simple mind is an awesome app!
     
  7. Kimbet, I based the hight and need for power on fairies in general, and opal kabio (Fav character in the AF books btw!) but the other elves and dwarfs things are based on a nerdy game my brother plays, World of Warcraft!
     
  8. Ur favorite in AF is opal koboi? I prefer Juliet and No1
     
  9. I'm honestly a fan of Holly and Artemis.
     
  10. Has anyone read the latest one? The Atlantis complex?
     
  11. Halfway through. Orion is hilarious so far.
     
  12. I know, Its wierd, I normally like the villans, so in AF #1, Artemis was my fav, but opal just keeps coming back, and het crazyness, just adds to our list of simalarities! Mwahahahahaha!!!
     
  13. "Oh contraire, my fair maiden or sire, whichever thou may be," lol
     
  14. I've read it fangedwolf!! Wow, out of my friends at school, no one has read it, it's awesome that people understand the awesome power of those books here!
     
  15. Lol, oh Orion. Anyway the eighth book is probably the last one and I was thinking of writing a fan made sequel
     
  16. "and thy noble steed, thou shall carry me off into thy sunset, for a I am the white night thou have been questing for," LOL
     
  17. That would be so cool! Can I help? (pls!!!)
     
  18. It's probably not the last one. They need to cure it first, and then maybe permanently wipe Artemis, butler, and juliets minds. And mrs fowl too
     
  19. Me too plz plz oh plzplz oh pleasy please please?!