The Mage-Smith Teaser and Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Secret-Blade, Mar 21, 2014.

  1. Prologue:

    The dark room and musty smell didn't penetrate into the man's senses until the deep voice of his master pierced the room. "Find him, for he could become a threat to our power. Then eliminate him." The man nodded his head, scampering out the door, already thinking of the rewards he would get when he found and killed the boy.



    Chapter 1: A Return To The Past

    I paused, wiping sweat from my brow as I saw the metal forming to the blade that everyone seemed to need an endless supply of. I picked up the hammer once more, and began to work, forming the metal with time and patience, so my dad taught me. As I kept working, the village around me began to fill with sounds again. I heard little feet running from my family's cabin, and turned around to see my little sister Abel holding up her skirt. "Daniel, mom needs you in the kitchen! She said something about needing another hand with breakfast!" I sighed, the patted my sister's head