My name is Grace I have been here for as long as I can remember. I hate it here its always dark and lonely and I can hear the other peoples screams. I wonder how I got here I don't know. Anyone but the person who comes here every day
He always hurts me. But I don't feel it anymore when I am alone I strengthen myself. I don't think they know what I can do
Chapter one I feel as if I am special ... but the man who comes here every day doesn't notice. I can do things. I can make things
Yesterday I made the man who came here hurt. Like he always makes me hurt I do not think I should have done it though because now he is getting new machines ready for me. He grabbed me and took my hands out of the chains. I almost fainted I didn't remember what it was like to touch the ground.
I felt my face sting despising he had hit me with a whip. And then the pain came it filled my entire body I let out a horrible scream I needed it to stop I was feeling faint and then everything went black
Chapter 2 I woke up to a new sensation the sun. It took me a minutes to realize I has been unconconcious. I wasn't wearing clothes the only thing in my cell was a sword. I had been practicing my making myself swords and hitting the wall with them. But this sword was different it wasn't as good as my sword. Suddenly my cell opened. I ran out the only way I could see and then I ran through the door and bang. The door closed behind me. The light blinded me and I realized that many people were in seats and I was walled in a sort of prison.
Chapter 3 I dropped the sword that they gave me and made myself my sword. My sword was a double bladed steel sword perfectly sharp it gild cut through the iron in my prison cell it have a diamond hilt that perfectly fitted my hand. The crowd ohhed and ahhed. It was obvious that this was going to be easy. I finnaly see my first opponent.
He is a royal guard with a electrik whip i decided that this wasn't fair and made my sword disappear. He advanced and I laid down and decided I would just let I'm torture me. Public humiliation wasn't to bad for me. And then before I realized it 10 more guards materialized with whips. I decided this would be painful even for me. Then the pain came again shock after shock came I tried using my powers to heal myself but I didn't have energy and then the first guard struck. I screamed a long peircing scream. Scream after scream slescaped my lips. I could hear the taunts from the crowds. And then I got angry.
Chapter 4 now I was really angry summoning all my strength as I had taught myself I flew up into the air and looked at the shoocked crowd. I brought down energy strikes killing the guards the entire area was in panici started summoning Ny greatest power when all the sudden I felt a splitting pain hit my head and turned around to see a tank right behind me and a bunch of rebels fighting with the remenents of the guards.
Chapter 5 I woke up in a tree well at least that's what I thought it was. A house in a tree I was tied up with vines. Also from the tree but there was a glass thing right next to me I looked into it and gasped. That was the first time I saw myself. I was about seventeen but my body looked older because of all the tortures my breasted was bare same as all parts of my body. I had never had clothes I was as you would call it beautiful. With long Blondel hair a slender but strong body and light blue piercing eyes. I was very skilled with the sword and longbow from training myself I was also practically immune to tortures. And also yeah I had cool powers.
Chapter 6 The door to my room opened and a good looking man who was very fit and strong. Hello I said but he just glared at me and said I didn't know the king recruited girls. What? I said he continued girls shouldn't follow the path of deceit. Girls should be the good ones. WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT I YELLED AT HIM I JUST GOT OUT OF LIVING DEATH AND NOW YOU THINK IM ON GOOD TERMS WITH THE KING!!!
What? He said. That's right I said I spent my whole life in his torture cells and I don't even feel it when I'm elecricuted. No! He said you cant trick me with you're lies. I am stronger then that. Annd a pure lady would wear clothes he said. And he threw me something. What do I do with this I said. But he just laughed and said put it on but after I stared questioningly at him he took it and put it on my breast. Despite my struggles and I yelled WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!!! whoa he replied you really have been in the torture chambers?
Chapter 7 Yes I said angrily and unless you want me to show you what I can do I advise you let me go! yeah right he said you cant be that strong and that's where I got angry again tearing the ones of me I flew up in a rage and summoned fire around me whoa there beautiful I wouldn't do that if I were you and then the worst pain ever hit me I screamed my loudest in a reapeating cry aaahhhhhhhhhhhh'!! The paint stayed with ne even although I felt weak it hurt to much for me to black out I couldn't talk ir move or close my eyes and then I died or at least the pain stopped and everything went black When I finally woke up I was laying face down on the ground and I could feel garbage on top of me ... they must have thrown me away I thought indignantly! And I flew out of the garbage landing in a clean pool with many other people who screamed loudly.
Interesting story. However, I suggest at some point you go through and fix the grammatical/spelling errors. At times it was painful for my eyes to read. I do enjoy it, and I would like to read more
Chapter 8 Embarresed I got out of the pool along with everybody else. Who are you somebody asked you just fell out of the sky are you a God? No I said angrily I'm not a God and I'm almost normal! And then I saw the person from my room running towards me and he said I told you not to do that .. but how did you survive? I'm special I said ... and he said ... hey I believe that you hats the king we are the rebels at war and we would really like it if you could help us. Yes I said anything to get payback for all that painful torture ... I will have my revenge