The Last Samurai

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Percyous (01), Sep 6, 2012.

  1. The Last Samuri
    By Percyous

    I stood amongst the bodies of the fallen protecting the shogun until the end. As i gazed into the enemie's ranks i heard my shogun ask "You understand that this is suicide right Aizen?" I spoke to him without turning, "If this is my destiny so be it, i will do my duty until the end, just allow me one request." "what is it aizen?" He replied curiously. "take my katana when i have died, take all the blood from it and put that blood in a jar with some of
    mine. I will outlast my fallen comrades and fight after death." Before he could reply i was halfway down the hill charging the army. Me versus 500 mercenaries and pirates. I liked those odds a lot.

    As I was surrounded by the enemy blinded by dust kicked up by our fight i reminded myself, I am here to die. I found i had no problem with that, as i looked back on my life i relized why i was doing this, To take as many of these traitors down as possible. I created them and now i had to destroy them. I was soon covered in blood, but only a fluid ounce of it was mine. Then HE appeared, their leader and the source of my problems, Shinjiko Tamoro. It was time to face my biggest challenge and threat, but i found myself thinking back to the old days......
     
  2. What the hell is this?

    You have redefined the word "terrible" by writing this.
     
  3. Thanks! I will update later today!
     
  4. Thanks, the delete key may come in handy during the edit.
     
  5. Thank you for your support and bumps! I'll continue writing since you guys love this story so much!
     
  6. *cough* moron *cough cough*
     
  7. Look who's talking, King. :roll:
     
  8. You know I kinda like this kid.
     
  9. Good job there !
     
  10. Hey, I've improved in the art of posting (somewhat)
     
  11. "Stop Thief!" The gaurd's voice voice rang in my ears as i raced through the streets with a piece of bread in my hands. I was the thief. I felt no shame in knowing that most thought me to be the lowesr type of scum there was. To me it was their fault, they were the true criminals. They took my entire clan from me, my family was dead because of them.

    "Let go of me!" Was all I could say to the man that had caught me picking his pocket. "Why should I young thief? Where are your parents? I want to give them a piece of mind." "Dead, So is the entire kurisaki clan! So take me to prison, atleast you get three meals a day there." The man looked me in the eyes "So you are the last kurisaki eh?" "Yeah, whats it to you if you're gonna take me to jail?" "Well little aizen," (how he knew my name was beyond me) You may get free food in jail but you would get a free hand removal there, second of all I am Shongo Tamoro, and your father and I were great friends."

    (btw, i've already wrote all of this out the entire thing plus book two is on the app(by the same pple who brought you KaW and FC) PIMD)
     
  12. Post more here pls!:) it's great!
     
  13. Oh. So you're from PIMD.

    Well, that explains a lot of things.
     
  14. As I walked behind Mr. Tamoro I wondered how he knew my father. All he told me was that he had a place where I could stay, that was good enough for me. As we turned down a paved path I looked up and saw a huge house, it was so big I already expected myself to get lost inside. When I looked at a doorway I was just intime to see a boy that looked about my age disappear inside the doorway only to peek back out in a few seconds. Mr.Tamoro motioned for me to wait and went to speak with the boy. After a few minutes of talking the boy finally came out of hiding and I got a good a good look at him.

    He was a thin looking boy, but not a hungry thin, more like a choice thin, he looked like a stick but I relized I was still thinner than him, we were both the same hight and both of our hair were black, his hair however was clean and pulled back in a traditional hair knot, mine constantly hung around my face. "Aizen Kurisaki, meet my son, Shinjiko Tamoro."
     
  15. New name, name is already a movie, copyright infringement. I'll twitter Tom Cruise about it, expect court summons by Thursday.
     
  16. Not That Funny You Can Do Better.
     
  17. i think its good
     
  18. You know Tom too? Awsome! I'll dial him up and we can go out fo some lunch! Me and Tom are tight! I didn't know you were tight with him too! Anyway I'll see you then. *cough* this was originaly a one shot but I asked and was told by pimd readers to continue *cough*
     
  19. Jeez. Everyone here hates pimd, huh? I almost started to defend you, percy, but then I realized… you hate me. Well. Anyways.
     
  20. I'll explain why to you if you want. Not here though.