The Last Night: Fiction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxBrooke_ParisXx, Nov 5, 2011.

  1. Prologue
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    Ravens mom was driving home from work one rainy night. The roses were slippery and dangerous. She drove over a bridge when she saw a red pool of... Of... Blood?! She pulled over and saw the worst creature! Its skin was melting, it's eyes, were just sockets, and it's hands were all claws, and razor sharp teeth.
    "Omigawd!! What is that!?" She screams
    "Nnnn" it moaned a dragged over to her.
    "S-Stay back!" She grabbed a shard of glass she spotted
    "AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Like that could stoop mee!" it cackled as it lunged at her
    "AHHHHHHHH!!" Ravens mom screamed
    Blood spaltered everywhere! Little did Raven's mom know that, that bridge had news articles, that everyone who crossed it never came back to the other side.
    The police came 20 minutes later with Raven.
    "MOM!!!" Raven cried, she tried to run over to her mom but the police lady holds her back.
    "Its not safe. You should've even came." The lady said
    Mom... Raven started to cry. With her dad always on business trips, and her older brother at college, she was alone.
    "Raven, do you have any other family members to live with?" The police lady asked
    "Y-yes! My brother.." I lie
    "Well ok. Is he older than 18?"
    "Yes. He's 19." I lie again. My
    Brother is only 17. But I don't want to live with anyone else. I can live alone. I'm 16 and I have a good Job at a fancy resturaunt. I drive home and cook dinner. I have a dog, Shiloh, she's a white Pomeranian, she's small, and really fluffy. I feed her and eat dinner.
    This is my new life...
     
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  3. Chapter 1: Exam Day
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    I ate dinner quietly and went to bed right away. It was 11:30pm so I was really tired. I had nightmares about my Mom's fate.. And her voice rang in my head... "Raven I'm going to work now." "Ok! I love you mom." "I love you to Raven." Then... I never saw her again... And I never will...
    The next morning I woke up at 9am.
    "OH NO!!! IM LATE FOR SCHOOL!!" I cried
    I ran downstairs and hurried outside. I'm gonna be late!! :eek: I ran as fast as I could to not be late.
    *Riiiing* Well, I ended u being late anyways...
    "Raven! You're late! Why?!" Lilly asks
    "Oh, I gues you could say I couldnt get up this morning heh." I replied
    "Oh?" Lilly looked at me
    I guess I was making a face... She didn't know my mother had 'gone'... I don't know what Lilly would do if I told her... She'd tell her mom even if I told her not to... When it came to life stuff this bad Lilly would tell her mom. Although nothing bad enough was to be reported to her mom.
    "Ok, so today's exams right?" I ask
    "Yes! How could you forget such a horrible day?!" Lilly laughed
    'Horrible day huh... Nothing could've been worse than what happened to my mom... I started on my exam, I had all 4 exams today. I think I passed.
    "Ah, so... How do you think you did?" Lilly asked streching
    "Hmm I think I did good. What about you?" I replied
    " Well, I think I atleast passed."
    " Ahaha ok." I said smiling :)
    Such a nice day isn't it mom? I said looking up to the sky. It was a nice sunny day. The last week of school. I was so happy that summer vacation was coming and my brother would be coming home! I haven't seen im sincd Christmas! Its felt even longer than that though. He would've called if he heard about mom... I know he would've.. :/ I went home and sat on the couch and watch some tv. When someone knocked on the door..