The Last Defense SignUp

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mournful_Assassin, Jan 12, 2011.

  1. I am writing my third book, But I have No ideas for names. Here's the prolouge
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    I woke up. The alarm clock rattled out of my reach as I reached for the snooze button. My sisters were looking pretty flamed. "Wake up! It's time for school!"
    Two voices said. I rolled over and got out of bed. I got dressed in my favourite Abercrombie shirt and jeans. My sisters were right! IT WAS 7:30!!!! I HAD TO GO! I speeded through brushing my teeth and completely skipped brushing my hair.
    I ran to school, but We still got late slips. I spaced off in math, fell asleep in social studies, and completely skipped science.
    At lunch, as I got into the line, [unnamed] sneered at me. "You're so wierd. Why can't you just die so the whole school will be normal?" I was steamed. I mean, everyone knew there was something special about my family, but people didn't make fun of it! I knew there was going to be a fight. I daydreamed throughthe rest of the day, a glorious daydream where I was normal. I loved every second of it. But then I was woken by the bell. I rushed through lockers and went outside. [unnamed] was waiting. He threw the first punch, the first of two. I felt nothing as he punched me, though he cradled his fist like I'd hit it. I punched him, and he went flying. I had just discovered my power. I was MiddleSchool's Superman!
     
  2. .....that is...a prologue right?
     
  3. yes and a signup
     
  4. STFU about it being half the book im makin the chapters longer next time
     
  5. Hmm...a prolougue is mention as a set up. A past history of the current events of your story. Like...he got his powers because this happened this long ago. Your "prologue" is really more like a chapter.
     
  6. Hmm hs superheros.........sure I'll bite

    Name: Warren Brooks
    Age: 17
    Appearance:tall, black hair, tattoo on shoulder of Chinese saying "peace and war", wears jeans and jacket mostly
    Power: can make surrounding area colder and shoot frost out of fingertips
    Bio: has only a few friends, he doesn't socialize much. He's a mechanics son so he's knows alot bout them and is restoring older cars for work. He found he had powers when the air conditioning was broken at the shop and tried to get colder. Currently, no one knows bout his powers.
     
  7. k he'll be the bully guy
     
  8. If he's mostly a loner, that wouldn't really make sense to make him a bully just saying
     
  9. well this is kinda like mylifefantacisedand in my life the bully is a loner
    but hey your character
     
  10. Name: Tacie
    Appearance: Gorgeous, Blonde, Blue Eyed
    Power: Silence, Stopping All Use Of Power Within 10 Metres Of her for 1 minute.
    Personality: Given The Name( Which Means Silence) And Her Power I think U Would Have Already Figured Out She Was A Loner



    Name: Frannie
    Power: When She Hold Hands With Sum1 Their Power Bcums Much More Powerful
    Appearance: Long Black Hair, Brown Eyes
    Personality: Outgoing, Smart, Bitter

    Wait Switch The Appearances Around.
     
  11. Name: James
    Powar: hunting heroes(exceeds at what he does)
    Appearance: black ripped jeans and long black coat that usually is flowing epicly, green eyes, is well built and strong


    He usually is playing xbox or killing superhero/villains


    Do it 
     
  12. Name: Jerad
    Age: 18
    Appearance: Dark blue eyes,short brown hair,masculine,coffee colored skin (I'm mixed so I'm not tan nor white nor black I'm like a coffee-caramel color)
    Bio: when I was nine months old my parent committed arson…or started a fire purposely…in our house,they set me in my cradle and walked out the door.
    After the fire had been put out,firefighters found me giggling in my intact cradle.
    By the age of 11 I'd made 2 accidental forest fires.
    Power: Fire-The surrounding area around him gets warmer,fire shoots from his eyes and hands,he is invulnerable to fire and earth.
    Personality-Bold brave outspoken outgoing intelligent and romantic
     
  13. ok, these guys will be introduced laterz in da book signups closed for now
     
  14. What? Closed that sucks
     
  15. signups reopened as i gotz writersblock
     
  16. Name - Cygnus
    Age - unknown
    Bio - a mysterious person, noone really knows a lot about him, only that he has something to do with the mechanical screeches in the woods near the school.
    Weapons - at most, he uses his dagger
    Power - Able to manipulate machines, and occasionally, when the ancient man (he's secretly 32,156) gathers his strength, he can change everything around him into a machine that bends to his will.

    Appearance - tall, covered completely in blackleather, and wears shaded goggles to cover his eyes. Occasionally, he can be seen with his left arm uncovered, revealing a mechanical arm.

    GAME, if you don't put him in, the cake will get it! 
     
  17. I forgot.

    Personality - Cygnus has never been known to talk, and he is mostly self-reliant. He rarely needs help, and is usually taking the lead, silently leading the group. When he talks, he speaks little, but a message is sent that only an ancient can deliver.
     
  18. Ooh that reminds me
    Addition to Power:
    When he gets really angry volcanic eruptions begin happening,things suddenly catch on fire, and the oxygen levels get lower and lower and lower until you suffocate…
    Bio: I have carried cigarette lighters around with me since I was 7 if anyone bothered me I'd fry them to a crisp if it was necessary.
    Ladies man. Has a knack fir getting hot girls.
    Is very popular even with his past (no ones knows his past) and is a school favorite. Is good at sports and has an ongoing football career going to help get his anger out so he can't hurt anybody with his anger=fire issues.
     
  19. ok! they both die!