The last cohort/battle field feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xantam (01), Nov 16, 2010.

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  1. I just posted my story and criticize it please! No trolls please
     
    #1 *xantam (01), Nov 16, 2010
  2. Not bad man
     
    #2 german_idiot, Nov 17, 2010
  3. Thanks :)
     
    #3 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  4. That was one of the best stories I read. Awesome job xantam!
     
    #4 *Caliber (02), Nov 17, 2010
  5. I'm not done yet :p
     
    #5 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  6. Alright barbarians FTW
     
    #6 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  7. Based on what you wrote so far.
     
    #7 *Caliber (02), Nov 17, 2010
  8. I can't wait to see how Tarjes developes I put like 4 Hastalamani characters in 
     
    #8 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  9. High five tj  BARBARIANS RULE
     
    #9 german_idiot, Nov 17, 2010
  10.  im hoping they win (antrads my 4 character)
     
    #10 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  11. I wonder how my character will turn out.
     
    #11 *Caliber (02), Nov 17, 2010
  12. My dudes Marcinus and he's losing an eye so u know he's been in some tough ****
     
    #12 german_idiot, Nov 17, 2010
  13. Was he a barbarian?
     
    #13 *Caliber (02), Nov 17, 2010
  14. I posted 4 Hastalamani 1 osthoroth and1 veterii (I think those are the terms)
     
    #14 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  15. Of course caliber




    Ps what caliber r u 30, 50?
     
    #15 german_idiot, Nov 17, 2010
  16. What?
     
    #16 *Caliber (02), Nov 17, 2010
  17. Thanks everyone
     
    #17 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  18. OOOOHHHHH i made a messanger  his pants lol
     
    #18 TheSilverPanda, Nov 17, 2010
  19. Mmmm. Good. Lolz.

    iZ
     
    #19 Nlaz, Nov 17, 2010
  20. Wouldn't be anything without you man ;)
     
    #20 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
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