The land of KaW

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TwilightAssassin, Mar 28, 2011.

  1. I decided to write a story, so here I go...

    The land of KaW

    Prologue

    The ancient statue of the mighty King kaw_admin shone in the bright sun. His noble servant, kaw, right next to it, together the statues looked priceless. Nobody knows how they died but there are rumours that kaw poisoned the king then himself. On the other side of the entrance to the one-hundred-trillion gold palace was a statue of the current king, Gor-illa. Nobody knew how he became king because heir to the throne was in fact Majesty.
     
  2. Chapter one: A visitor

    Gor-illa was just looking out his massive bedroom window when there was a knock at the door. "Laoda! Get the door will you?" he shouted down the marble spiral staircase at his servant. "Yes your majesty," she politely replied. As she opened the door Gor-illa appeared at the bottom of the spiral staircase waiting to greet his guest. "Hello," Laoda greeted the Prime-minister. "Ah, Gor-illa how are you?" Metallicana asked the king. "Same old, same old," Gor-illa replied "you?". "Quite worried actually, Majesty, your brother, has gone missing!" Metallicana said with a slight bite of worry in his voice. Fantastic! -RobinHood- did as I payed him to do, kidnap my brother. The King and Prime-minister discussed how they could help search for him. After a few drinks Gor-illa told him that he had payed -RobinHood- a large sum of money. At that the Prime-minister shouted "Assassin! You evil assassin, how could you pay to have your own brother kidnapped!". Eventually the King bribed the Prime-minister not to tell anyone.
     
  3. *Please note* Please post all feedback in my feedback thread NOT this one, thank you.

    Chapter two: In the forest

    -RobinHood- was dragging the blind-folded Majesty in to the deep Forbidden forest. "I'm not scared of you!" Majesty screamed! "Yeah, yeah," -RobinHood- replied. "As brother of the King I demand you tell me your name!" Majesty said quite confidently. "I'll tell you my name if you can work out this question, who killed kaw_admin?" -RobinHood- said, also quite confidently. Majesty froze for a bit trying to remember his history lessons at school. It was hard remembering stuff after you've been whacked cold round the head with a heavy stick. "kaw" Majesty answered. "Wrong," -RobinHood- said. "So I guess I'll have to leave you here to die, I mean it's getting late I should really get home for my tea," -RobinHood- sniggered. So all alone in the Forbidden forest was Majesty. Putting on a brave face, remember he is blind-folded, he slept.

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    Majesty awoke abruptly. He had heard a twig snap, someone was coming. "Hello?!" Majesty helplessly cried. "Anyone there?" he said again. "Only me," a soft and gentle voice replied. "Please don't hurt me," Majesty kindly asked. "I'm not here to hurt you but help you on your quest," the gentle voice said quietly. "Who are you?" Majesty asked now a bit relieved that he was not going to be beaten. "I am Season," the voice replied. She then untied the helpless man.
     
  4. Chapter three: The quest begins!

    When Season untied Majesty he said "Thank you so much, I thought I was going to die out here!". "I don't seek you thanks but your help," she replied. At that Majesty immediately asked "What kind of help?". "Remember earlier -RobinHood asked you who killed kaw_admin, well I believe the rumour that kaw killed him is wrong. So basically will you help me find put who did kill kaw_admin?". "Ho-, how do you you know he asked me that?" Majesty asked curiously.
    You can't tell him that your queen of the nature spirits Season thought to herself. But you are able to trust him, I mean you did free him from certain death another voice said to her in her head. "I'm Season, you know: Queen Season of the nature spirits," she confidently said. Then she added "You won't tell anyone will you? If they ask who I am tell them I'm Katy Watersfield!". "Whoa! So your saying I was rescued by queen of the nature spirits?!" Majesty just checked. "Yes, will you help me and will you keep my identity secret?" Season asked again. "Yes I will help you and yes I will keep your identity secret," Majesty replied then he said "Now please can we go get some food, I'm starving!". "Fine! But your paying!" Season said with a bite of disappointment in her voice. She wanted to get on with her research.
     
  5. Chapter four: The search

    "WHAT?!" Gor-illa yelled, "YOU LOST HIM." "No- Not exactly, he was untied by someone," -RobinHood- protested.
    "Your poster, your majesty," Laoda said to Gor-illa. "Well done, atleast someones doing the right thing,"
    Gor-illa praised.

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    Season was just weaving together the
    Hezicano protection spell when a stack of posters appeared in Majesty's magical bag. "Uh-Oh, I'm wanted by my brother! Anyone who brings me to him alive gets a 3,000,000,000 gold reward," Majesty cried. He then added "You don't happen to know a spell to make us seem invisible to wandering villagers?". "There is one," Season replied, then she whispered " Disanpol, " immediately a bright pink semi circle appeared above their heads. After they'd made camp they went back in to there tents and slept.
    Little did they now what the morning had in store for them...