The land of KaW: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TwilightAssassin, Mar 28, 2011.

  1. Please post any and all of your feedback here for my story "The land of KaW"!
     
    #1 TwilightAssassin, Mar 28, 2011
  2. A bit like revolution
     
    #2 Interrobang, Mar 29, 2011
  3. ^very much so
     
    #3 cheesemuffin, Mar 30, 2011
  4. AWESOME!
     
    #4 Matthew4194, Mar 30, 2011
  5. You have potential, just make sure u always use the correct punctuation, start a new paragraph when someone speaks, and find and editor that can help you with your writing.
     
    #5 Fangedwolf, Mar 31, 2011
  6. My story was going great until IRONhulk ruined it...
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    Drop hire him so he's overpriced!
     
    #6 TwilightAssassin, Apr 1, 2011
  7. You just contradicted yourself. It's drop volley.
     
    #7 Fangedwolf, Apr 2, 2011
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