The Journey Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WW1225, Jul 24, 2010.

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  1. This is for all comments, ideas, suggestions, and friendly criticism is welcome.

    I will keep this thread updated on when I post new chapters.

    Thank you for your cooperation.
     
    #1 WW1225, Jul 24, 2010
  2. Chapter 1 posted
     
    #2 WW1225, Jul 24, 2010
  3. Intresting! You must go on!!!
     
    #3 *Irin (01), Jul 24, 2010
  4. Thx, I might later tonite, glad u like it
     
    #4 WW1225, Jul 24, 2010
  5. Wooo! Very cool
     
    #5 *Utho (01), Jul 24, 2010
  6. Thx utho
     
    #6 WW1225, Jul 24, 2010
  7. I greatly enjoyed reading it! Very suspenseful! I am curious to see how you will lead into the second chapter :)
     
    #7 *McSpanky18 (01), Jul 24, 2010
  8. Nice!!
     
    #8 mathew057, Jul 24, 2010
  9. Thx guys
     
    #9 WW1225, Jul 24, 2010
  10. Chapter 2 posted, there r 2 post 4 one post. I accidentally press submit 2 early, please ignore the quotation at the end of the first part of chapter 2, thank u
     
    #10 WW1225, Jul 25, 2010
  11. I DEEM YOUR TOPIC GOOD Good Job!!!
     
    #11 *JaacoXIII (01), Jul 25, 2010
  12. Thx
     
    #12 WW1225, Jul 25, 2010
  13. Suspencefull! I'm looking forward for more.
     
    #13 *Irin (01), Jul 25, 2010
  14. Thx
     
    #14 WW1225, Jul 25, 2010
  15. Type more. NOW! 
     
    #15 *Utho (01), Jul 25, 2010
  16. Lol, maybe...
     
    #16 WW1225, Jul 25, 2010
  17. Wen do u get to me in the story
     
    #17 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010
  18. I'll get to u, don't worry
     
    #18 WW1225, Jul 25, 2010
  19. Good next chapter to my story in write co forum
     
    #19 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010
  20. Chapter 3 up! Sry for the delay, family flew in.
     
    #20 WW1225, Jul 29, 2010
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