The Jealousy of Lye

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by KingReese627, Sep 24, 2014.

  1. There once was a man named David as I recall who lived in a village outside a large city home to the capitals castle he kept to himself mostly as ran his farm. But one day barbarians came and burned it all down everything but him he only survived. He became very depressed the king being the generous man he was gave him a home in town but still he was depressed he tried killing himself but the rope snapped. Then one day as he was going to the market he saw the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen and she says to him "hi" David being the not so bright guy stumbles on words. She laughs seeing that he's stumbles "aww".
     
  2. David looks downward in despair but she looks to him and says "no it's alright I think it's cut" after that they really hit it off and start to date. Then one day as he brings her roses he shed her with a knight they're talking and she's giggling and he asks "whose that" she says "oh it's no one". He dismisses at first and continues on the next day same thing now he gets a little mad and 2 days is the royal ball so David tells the man to leave her alone the man says no and David intimidated leaves. Next day same thing this time he pushes the man down and the girl pushes David away she's leave I never want to see u again! He leaves next day at the ball David has plan he sees the knight at the table as he leaves he also leaves his cup behind so David switches out the cup. The knight comes back and drinks it then starts to choke and bleed from his mouth the girl runs to the night yelling " no no no brother don't die" David thinks to himself " oh my gosh I just killed him with lye". The next day the girl seeking comfort goes to David's house to find him hung with blood dripping from his mouth.
     
  3. AJ shhhh! U didn't anything -disappears mysteriously-