The Hand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Kurosaki_Ichigo123, Aug 21, 2012.

  1. I was sitting in my kingdom eating peacefully thinking what i would would do today. I went to the Weapon Shop and saw a a hand behind the bush."Its just a mannequin hand" I thought. Suddenly I saw it twitch and ran all the way to the Food Market. The children saw a hand sticling up from the fountain. They put a rock on it and suddenly moved. I moved the kids away from the hand and walked to my castle. I saw the hand again, near my Kingdom I yelled "GET THAT HAND AWAY FROM ME!!!" The guards took away the hand and threw it into the trash. I went to bed and slept. I had a dream, my Mother was with me when I was still a child, my father was with me too they were holding my hands, smiling at me. Then hands appeared from the ground and grabbed my parents. Then I woke up. I couldn't take it anymore I have to KILL myself. I grabbed my sword and ended my life. Goodbye, World


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  2. Ok, uh sorta weird but, ok
     
  3. Akward silence
     
  4. ... Too short and creepy... More suspense needed
     
  5. Ermahgerd, the hand just grabbed me!