THE GUARDIANS REBIRTH "GET MOVING! NO SLACKING OFF, KEEP MINING THAT ORE! said the Foreman, "YOU HUMANS ARE THE SCUM OF THE GALAXY!" He cracked his laser whip, and an agonizing scream could be heard. A man fell to the ground limp short of breath. Onlookers rushed to help him up, but were staved by the quarry guards. "Kill him, his usefulness is no more." scoffed the Foreman. "Make his death slow and painful. Let this be an example to the rest of the lot!" Five guards with laser rifles steped up and forced the already weakened man to his feet. "GUARDS! AIM!!!!!" Foreman ordered, "READY..... FI....." Off in the distance a voice can be heard, "Caring as ever, huh Foreman?" the voice boomed. "Who? Where?"Foreman yelled in confusion, "FORGET IT! KILL THIS FILTH NOW!!" "Roger that sir!" the guards replied. They start pulling the trigger...... A hail of laser blasts is seen. The guards fall to the ground The worker crawls away. Foreman looks up, red with rage. "HOW DARE!..." his face goes a ghostly pale white. "Y-y-you.... I-it can't be!!" He begins to shudder as the workers begin an uprise. "How is it possible? I saw the destruction of your kind!" he exclaims, "THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE!" "Just like the Empire to overlook the minute details." preached the figure. "As long as there is a conscious, an inteligent being, there is always hope, a dream, freedom!" Foreman begins to smirk, "well, with all your talk, do you have any power to liberate this galaxy?" With that a beam of light teleports him to an obiting cruiser, and the mine is pumbled with heavy fire from space. As the dust fades the mysterious figure stands alone, distraught with the scene before him. The mine lay barren, void of life. Machinery reduced to fragments, and bodies litter the ground. All is silent, not even a breeze stirs. "I-I can't believe this...." the figure chokes out, "I couldn't save them......." He falls to his knees, unable to fathom what just happened, he is unable to speak anymore. The ground around him begins to tremble and break. "ARGH!! What's happening???" He cries out, "So much rage! I need to meditate...." He closes his eyes and slowly takes deep breath. The tremors cease, and everything is silent once more. He slowly gets to his feet and walks away from the mine. Unbeknownst to him a small shuttle was observing the scene, and began following him. He only notices the ship when it speeds up and stops infront of him and lands. A hatch drops down and a young womans silhouette appears in the ships light. "well, well! It looks like I have a young guardian in front of me." she cooed, "And by the looks of it, you're quite powerful." She begins to walk down the hatch with a suductive swagger. The young man starts to see more of her features. "err.... Wha?!" he cries as he stares down the barrel of a railgun. She just laughs as the rising moonlight illuminates her face. "Oh... It's you," he said with a relieved sigh, "Alison." "I TOLD YOU IT'S ALLIE! AND ALL I GET IS 'OH... IT'S YOU?'!" she replied furiously, "C'MON VICTOR! AFTER ALL WE'VE BEEN THROUGH, ALL THE SITUATIONS I PULLED YOU OUT OF?" She become louder, "AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF.... EEP!" she gets cut off as I stand up abruptly and place my face inches from hers. "So... did you get the other leaders like I asked?" I questioned. "umm.... y-yes I did victor..." she said taking a step back and turning her head to avoid eye contact.
THAT'S IT!!! I'M DONE!!! ENOUGH CRITICIZING MY WORK!! YOU DONT KNOW HOW I WORK!! I'M DONE! FINISHED WITH STORIES BECAUSR PEOPLE LIKE YOU ALWAYS HINK IM WRITING INCORRECTLY! THAT YOU KNOW WHERE THE STORY IS SUPPOSED TO GO! NO MORE STORIES FROM ME NOW!!! AGAIN IM DONE!!!!!