The gamers feedback

Haha havent put up the first chapter yet but thought I'd make the feedback thread first, so people won't post on the story. Do I need to join a company or something,?

 

let the critics criticize.

 

He will be in it, this is just the beginning, didn't want to put to many characters in at the star.Also do you mind if I change the age of Jackson?? I'm thinking of making him majesty.

 

Ahh so many errors, just realized them now that I re read it. Ahwell what can U do.

 

Ahh its going to be difficult, I was thinking about it. I will have to change him around alot if you don't mind, if not I could bring him into it later in the story.

 

Wow u didn't know that rofl, I've always thought herd looked wrong.

 

I sorry not u

 

Earth I guess. People that play video games. Thats about it, if you want to make a character.

 

Well modern day earth.

 

cuz i want to join iwrite lol. and yes i think your character will be in it.

 

Chapter 2 is up. Hope this will answer some of the questions some of you had.