The Emmisary

Ok, phew, this is my retry at a book. If it stinks, I would like that posted on my wall. If it follows any other stories, I'm sorry. Ok, here we go:
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Drake walked around town, (This story isn't going to be third person) wondering what had happened at the school. I thought, I do wonder. It was calm, then suddenly smoke was drifting down the hall. The scene replayed itself.

Mr. Blake had been teaching them, as usual, nobody was paying attention. The chalkboard screeched, and we all immeadiatly snapped our heads up. That's when we saw the smoke. Then the next moment, we were rushing down the hall, heads down, trying to hold our breath. Then we were let out of school. Then we end up here. My friends, Scarlet, Joshua, Sam, and Julie, along with Madison. We were passing the Sweet Toothe Candy Shop, and the scent of pastries made my stomach rumble.

 

Now, we kids had been trained as Mages and Warriors. Our whole world was like that. Mage, Rouge, or Warrior. We rounded the corner, and a burglar made a snatch for Madison's purse. She had her knife out in a flash. The burglar yelped, the ran away. She sheathed the knife, then we continued on. Silver Fish Cafe was on the other side, and we could see couples eating at the tables, the cafe lights dimmed a bit.

 

We walked on, past our town's central square. Our town's name was Locerelt. (Weird name, I get it) We continued, just exploring the town. The old shop, The Rusty Bottle, had closed, but it was reopened as The Perfect Mead. A bit old western. Exactly. Our town founder liked the Old West, apparently. My head snapped to a movement on a roof, and it sailed toward my chest like lightning...

 

Call Of Duty time, I thought. A riot shield had appeared just as the Rouge's knife slammed against it. He tried again, and this one shattered my spell completely. And I didn't have enough energy to cast the next. The knife sailed through the air, and locked onto me. And I passed out, thinking I had already taken my last breath...

 

When a shield, the spell shield called Shield Of Justice, sprang in front of me. And while fighting was happening above, I was below. In the world of dreams. Except I heard a cackling voice say, "Child. You can't stand against me. My Emmisary surronded by spies are tracking your every movement, young Mage."

 

I woke up, and noon was bright on my eyelids. I realized we had fallen asleep. I hastily woke the others up, and we sprinted of to University of The Arts. (Arts: Mage, Warrior, or Rouge) Now, lets zoom ahead after lessons, because, describing the details, you would've fallen asleep too. I met up at lunch with the others. Ugh, broccoli, spinach, and beans. I got all the other choices. We all sat down, and I told the about my dream. Scarlet nodded, and Joshua said, "Pretty weird to me." We all agreed on that. I finished my lunch, then went to the courtyard. It was with lush green grass, soft fluffy clouds, with lilting light blue sky, along with the tender light orange sun. I strolled to my favorite tree. It was shady, and one by one, my friends came out to sit with me.