The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

  1. Post feedback for my story here!!!

    Be honest!
     
  2. Good start. U double posted chapter 1 if ya didn't know. When is two coming out?
     
  3. Soon as in tomorrow?
     
  4. Maybe did any1 else read it?
     
  5. Not bad, I like it.
     
  6. Thanx


    I plan to do beggings for every characte then bring them all together
     
  7. That's really cool. So you see the events from different viewpoints. Nice. 
     
  8. I was writing it one way, didn't like it and decided to do it this way
     
  9. Love it when am i comin in
     
  10. I think ima do u next
     
  11. Huh what about me? (sniffs)
     
  12. Soon maybe chap 3


    U made 2 characters and u forgot about one?
    Utho and _________
     
  13. Idc about the other one. U can make him u want. My second char is on pg3 of signup
     
  14. Tell every1 to read
     
  15. I like this idea, u see one story from many different peoples views. I like the idea. Good story.
     
  16. Thanx

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  17. What did duke of tacos make a character